When reading through the course syllabus of EDCI 338, it stated that “each learner must reply to at least one other project”; because of this, I reviewed Mikayla Boulanger, Caitlin Doraty, Hongyuan Pan, Kevin Song, and Sadhik’s Final Project (linked below).

Final Presentation – EDCI 338

Final Presentation — EDCI 338

At first glance of your final project, I was thoroughly impressed by how much you all completed– I saw how much work you put into this. I noticed a PowerPoint, a Zoom video, an audio clip, a script, an outline, and a reference list.

Clicking around on the webpage that you provided for your final project, I also noticed that you gave credit to each member for who did what (my group did this too). I reflected and thought back to all the group projects I have been in where we did not do this…have I just been in the wrong classes? I love this!

Suggestions:

  • Perhaps your group may consider adding audio to the video. I am not sure if this was just me (perhaps it was), but it may be easier for learners to hear the audio with the video. For diverse learners, it may be confusing to have your lips moving at a different time than when you are talking.
  • Perhaps your group may consider editing the audio a bit. Editing the audio may make it easier to listen to.
  • Your group may also want to consider adding some visuals to your page.
  • It seems to me that you are missing some of the transcript from when you begin to talk. It may be more clear for learners to read everything you are saying (the beginning could be difficult to follow).

Final Thoughts

Thank you all so much for sharing what you have learned. I can see how much work you put into this. Great job everyone!